Episode 4: Pile of Dead Hookers

Have really enjoyed the additions with the city elves, it was really good thinking fleshing them out!

Need i say more? Also, I havent gotten to the credits yet but whoever did Mongo's snapping noises but it made me giggle right at the beginning of the episode.

well written, clever 10000/10

Overall I enjoyed the vast majority of this episode, but I think the Desperado Club manager lady was kind of... Unenthusiastic? I felt like that could have used a bit more effort in my opinion. The switch between Carl and Donut to that character was pretty hard to miss.

At the beginning of scene 6 there is a "typo". when Zev sends Carl a message, it says "Carl" and then Zev starts talking. When it says "Carl" next, carl talks. then it says "donut" and she talks

oak mother 4 was a bit too much for me. I dont believe for a second that matt wrote the dialogue and while the content expands the story, the dialogue and "ham" really took me out of the experience. also, why cant I use my swipe keyboard in this input box?

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