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Not a bad story, but it has too much tell and not nearly enough show. These stories feel far too short and rushed because of this issue. The other issue is word choice, honestly the author really needs to pick up a thesaurus. If you're listening to this story for the first time get ready to hear the word ecstatic at least three time a chapter. Over all, an interesting concept that fails utterly in execution.

I don't understand why this is Peggy Sue story. I thought episode 0 was meant but it at least had a good setup for a story with an evil company taking over, a hero quitting his guild which leaves his friend worried, another company taking an interest in the hero, an in-hame riot. And that gets undone by the end of that story and the beginning of this one Doesn't help that you seemed to start at the most boring part of the story with him trying to build his guild and business and its just not enjoyable to listen to to the point I just stopped listening. Maybe more voice actors would have helped but that can only help so much since I don't know how you can have a real job playing a MMO and the Peggy Sue thing which I don't understand how or why it happened. Listening to this only reminded me of some writing advice: "Is this the most interesting point of our characters life and if not why aren't you showing us that"

Classic power leveling and simple hero, villain dynamics. Root for the hero and they win without to much suffering. Convenient boy girl ratios for relationship development.

I really like the narration and the plot is tons of fun.

By day five I was smiling maliciously. Cant wait for the other books.👍

Loved the Audio to this book can't wait for the rest to come out

This was a fun and entertaining listen. The story and world progress well. The voice acting and sound effects are spot on. I’m hooked. Please enjoy