Traction

Boom 1 was good then I started this and it was good before all of the sudden we are getting a harem because the game forces the girls to have sex or lose their characters and when the MC says no they keep praising utill he accepts and makes a harem. He is in his 40s they are 18 that is wrong on so many levels.

A forty year old man hooks up with two eighteen year olds with little to no build-up. It was very uncomfortable to listen to, even if there was no explicit sex scene. The ending chapter literally had a line about how the main character walked away from combat holding their hands and how natural it felt. It ruined anything good about the story. Production quality is great, though.

Not a bad story, but it has too much tell and not nearly enough show. These stories feel far too short and rushed because of this issue. The other issue is word choice, honestly the author really needs to pick up a thesaurus. If you're listening to this story for the first time get ready to hear the word ecstatic at least three time a chapter. Over all, an interesting concept that fails utterly in execution.

the story had great action hope we get more books like that in the series. Loved the Audio to this book can't wait for the rest to come out

I was highly entranced by the book and the voice actors. I truly was pulled in and enjoyed the antics. Though I did not appreciate the harem or love triangle, I did find the approach appropriate and the telling humorous. I’m really enjoying the series.